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=Jake's famliy's new year's resolution= =8.11 Liu Qianjie= ===Look,This is Jake's famliy's new year's resolution. Jake is going to get good grades and learn to play basketball .Jake's father is going to find a part -time job and do more exercise, Jake's m__a__ther is going to learn to play an instrument and learn to do more delicious __meal__. Sonia is going to eat less junk food and communicate better with her __teacher__. T__her__e are Jake's famliy's new year's __resolution__ .What are you going to do next year?===

Hi, Qianjie, very good writing, only the underlined parts should be changed to : mother; food; teachers; These; resolutions

Keep trying, I believe you can do better! Miss Yin (Lynn)

** 8. 11 Feng Jun **
==== ** Jay Chou **** Jay Chou was born on January 18th, 1979, in Taiwan. He was very shy and **** He was quiet when he was a child. As a child, he dreamed __to become__ a famous actor like Bruce lee. ** ** He was interested in music and began learning to play the piano at the age of three. ** ** But now Jay Chou is changing __eyen__, though still shy and quiet. He became a little more outgoing. He is becoming self-confident now. He has his own style in music. ** ** In 2ooo Jay Chou produced his first album. To everyone’s surprise he became popular at once. In the following years he produced several albums of his own. Each of them was very successful. And in 2005 he began to enter the film industry. ** ** Jay Chou is a successful man. That’s why I admire him. ** ====

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Du Jinhui 8. 11 A new year is coming.Jack __anf__ his family have different New Year's resolutions.Jack's father is going to __fing__ a part-time job and he also wants to exercise more to keep healthy.Jack's mother is going to learn to play an instrument and she wants to learn to cook more delicious food.Jack is going to get good grades.And he is going to learn to play basketball.Sonia is going to eat healthy food.And she is going to communicate better with her teacher.

Hi, Jinhui, very good. but you seem to be in a hurry when writing. see the words spelling, right? Be careful next time. Miss Yin ( Lynn)

My Dream Job 8. 14 (ZhaoLu) I am a middle school student.I'm fourteen years old now.It's time to think about my dream job.I am going to be rich.So I have to study hard and learn a new language.I want to be an artist in the future.I am going to move somewhere interesting and beautiful.Maybe Beijing is a good place to study.I want to be a university student in Tsinghua University.When I am 18 years old I am going to find a part-time job and save some money.I want to buy a big house for parents.One day,I am going to retire,I will move to a quiet place with my parents,husband and son. This my dream job.What about you?

My dream job (Cheng Mengge from Class 14,Grade8)  When I grow up,I want to be an P.E. teacher，because I like P.E. And I think if I can help the of other peole about their P.E.I will feelvery happy and exciting,so how am I going to do it? First ,I'm going to play sports .Then I'm going to find a part-time job and save some money. Next,I'm going to be a student at aP.E. nniversity in Shanghai. Beacuse Shanghai souds like a city that I could enjoy.After that ,I'm going to find a job as P.E. teacher in Shanghai.Finally ,I achieving my dream .One day,I'm going to retire somewhere beautiful.And maybe I'm going to travel all over the world

My dream job (Li Dian from Class 14, Grade 8)  I have a drem .When I growup.Iamgoingto do what I want to do .I want to be an reporter.I think it is an exciting and interesing job. I am going to write articles and send them to magazines ahd newspaper.And after I finish high school,I want to go to uniwersity in Beijing. Beijing sounds like a city that I could enjoy. There are lots of competitons there .Then I want to work in a TV station. I want to be rich and buy a big house. I also want totravel al over the world with my parents one day .I am going to retire somewhere busy and beautiful.